Notes and Questions on George Herbert's Poetry
Since his schooling and cleverness matched John Donne's, it is no wonder that Herbert wanted to demonstrate his ingenuity in verse like Donne, who was extremely influential in English literature of the early seventeenth century -- but with the difference that all the verse would be religious, none secular. Indeed, one metapoetic theme in Herbert's poems, including in some anthologized in the Norton Anthology of English Literature (NAEL), is how religious poetry could be just as attractive to author and reader as secular poetry. Like Donne's religious verse, Herbert's is authentic and genuine in its feeling, whether the poem is in the plain or cleverly ornate style. By all accounts, Herbert was an exemplar of piety and Christianity after becoming a priest -- and of the proverb "the good die young," since Herbert only lived to be forty years old (1593-1633). As John Donne and Ben Jonson became the heads or founders of the two principal "schools" of seventeenth-century secular poetry in English literature of the seventeenth century, so Herbert became the guiding light of the religious metaphysical poets Richard Crashaw and Henry Vaughan (with whom can be grouped Thomas Traherne), who in their poetry often allude to Herbert's. (Donne crossed over with his metaphysical style into religious verse, and Jonson wrote a very few wholly [holy] religious poems, with his neoclassical lucidity, as to be expected : e.g., "To Heaven," the three-poem sequence "The Sinner's Sacrifice: '1. To the Holy Trinity, 2. A Hymn to God the Father, 3. A Hymn on the Nativity of My Savior'".)
Along with the 23 poems from Herbert's The Temple anthologized in NAEL6 or 24 poems anthologized in NAEL7 (out of 162, Herbert's total oeuvre, besides 14 others), Herbert ranged in several established ingenious poetic forms (which may be looked up in Harmon's and Holman's Handbook to Literature or Cuddon's and Preston's Penguin Dictionary of Literary Terms), including the acrostic, anagram, debat, echo poem, pruning poem, shaped poem, and wreath poem. With all these, including the shaped poems (also called altar poem, calligramme, carmen figuratum, concrete poem, figure poem, pattern poem, picture poem) and variations in meter and stanza structure (as exemplified in the NAEL selections), Herbert wanted to demonstrate that wit could be applied to these forms in sacred verse just as well as to secular verse. In the range of kinds of poems, their visual shapes, their inclusion in an overall work entitled The Temple, the many references to music and the visual arts, and in the collective and significant ornamentation, the poetry of George Herbert can be said to exemplify the Baroque. In addition to the decorative and ornamental (but not just superficially used) and extravagant in the the range of poems, visual shapes, control of metrical and stanzaic structure, and so on, Herbert's poetry has other Baroque qualities. Just as Baroque painting and music are dramatic and dynamic, so are some of Herbert's poems (e.g., the shaped poems, or the dramatic and dynamic emotions displayed by the speakers of poems, such as in "The Collar," or the dramatic change in the refrain in the poem "Virtue"). Just as Baroque painting and music are characterized by strong contrasts, so is Herbert's poetry (e.g., contrast among the various poetic forms or genres, contrast between tones within one poem, contrast between the tone of one poem and tone of another poem in the collection, or continual contrast between the secular and sacred). Another component sometimes identified as Baroque is monumentality; this component may be found in Herbert's gathering of 162 poems in a collection entitled The Temple, as well as his range of poetic forms and types. In Herbert's preoccupation with the struggle between religious and secular poetry, as well as between art's complexity and feeling's direct simplicity, one grouping of Herbert's diverse poems is the metapoetic. (Herbert's metapoetic poems make interesting comparisons with seventeenth-century paintings about painting such as Diego Velasquez's Las Meninas (The Maids of Honor) or Jan Vermeer's Allegory of the Art of Painting.) Further, Herbert's poor health, as well as other concerns and struggle with his own faith, provides another grouping of poems: those dealing with suffering.
Several editions of Herbert's poems, many in paperback or relatively inexpensive hardback, have appeared over the years, and several of these are in print (listed below alphabetically by editor), and well worth owning, since no greater religious poet has ever lived (though some-e.g., John Donne, Gerard Manley Hopkins-were equally great):
Anonymous [either from the edition by George Herbert Palmer in 1905 and rpt. in 1920, or the edition by Edward Thomas in 1908 and rpt. in 1927], ed. The Works of George Herbert. [Wordsworth Poetry Library.] Hertfordshire, Eng.: Wordsworth Editions, 1994. [223 pp.; all the poems of The Temple, plus table of contents, index of poems, index of first lines, short introduction and sketchy bibliography by Dr. Tim Cook.]
Enright, D. J., ed. George Herbert [Everyman's
Poetry series]. London: J. M. Dent, 1996. [102 pp.; pb; on the skimpy side:
100 of the 162 poems of the Temple.]
Hutchinson, F. E., ed. The Works of George Herbert.
1941; rpt. Oxford: Oxford UP, 1964. [619 pp.; hb; the authoritative edition.]
Martz, Louis, ed. George Herbert [Oxford Poetry Library]. London: Oxford UP, 1994. [222 pp.; pb; all the poems and excellent annotation.]
Patrides, C. A., ed. The English Poems of George Herbert. [Everyman's University Library.] 1974; rpt. London: J. M. Dent, 1977. [247 pp.; pb; all the poems and very good annotation.]
Slater, Ann, ed. The Complete English Works by George Herbert. [Everyman's Library.] New York: Alfred Knopf, 1995. [509 pp.; hb; all the poems and very good annotation.]
Summers, Joseph, ed. The Selected Poetry of George Herbert. [Signet Classic Poetry series.] New York: Signet Classics - New American Library, 1967. [288 pp.; pb; all the poems and good annotation.]
Thomas, R. S., ed. A Choice of George Herbert's Verse. 1967; rpt. London: Faber and Faber, 1988. [95 pp.; pb; skimpy -- 68 of the poems -- and no annotation.]
Tobin, John, ed. George Herbert: The Complete Poems.
[Penguin Classics series.] London: Penguin Books, 1991. [460 pp.; pb; all
the poems and very good annotation.]
Numbers given in square brackets, in this handout, indicate the position of the poem in the order given by Herbert in The Temple. Numbers in parentheses within the title of a poem, always given in titles of Herbert's poems, indicate that Herbert wrote more than one poem with the title (e.g., "Jordan (1)" and "Jordan (2)," or "Love (1)," "Love (2)," "Love (3)").
An outline
of the variety of forms or genres (or subgenres) within Herbert's poems represented either in NAEL or this
document is as follows (arranged alphabetically
by poetic form; most of these forms are to be found in a dictionary of
literary terms such as Harmon and Holman's
Handbook to Literature
or Cuddon's and Preston's Penguin Dictionary of Literary Terms):
| 1. Acrostic ("Colossians 3:3") | 7. Figure poem [or, alternatively, altar poem, carmen figuratem, calligramme, carmen figuratem, concrete poem, pattern poem, picture poem shaped poem] ("The Altar," "Easter Wings": |
| 2. Allegory ("Redemption") | 8. Lyric poem (many, including "Jordan (1)," "Denial," "Virtue," and "Life"; note how some of these-e.g., "Denial" and "Virtue" -- make especially meaningful use of the rhyme scheme or refrain) |
| 3. Anagram ("Ana-Mary/Army-gram") | 9. Pruning poem ("Paradise"; handout) |
| 4. Debat, dialogue ("A Dialogue-Anthem") | 10. Sonnet ("Redemption," "Prayer (1)") |
| 5. Dramatic monologue ("The Collar") | 11. Wreath poem ("Discipline": NAEL; "Sin's Round," "A Wreath": handout) |
| 6. Echo poem ("Heaven") |
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| 1. Acrostic
COLOSS. 3.3 Our life is hid with Christ in God [No. 60] My words & thoughts do both express this notion, That Life hath with the sun a double motion. The first Is straight, and our diurnal friend, The other Hid and doth obliquely bend. One life is wrapt In flesh, and tends to earth. The other winds towards Him, whose happy birth Taught me to live here so, That still one eye Should aim and shoot at that which Is on high: Quitting with daily labor all My pleasure, To gain at harvest an eternal Treasure.
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2. Allegory (& Sonnet): "Redemption" (in NAEL7)
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| 3. Anagram
Ana-{MARY/ARMY}-gram
[No. 52]
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4. Debat, dialogue poem
A Dialogue-Anthem
[No. 89]
Christian Alas, poor Death,
where is thy glory?
Death
Alas poor mortal, void of story,
Christian Poor Death!
And who was hurt thereby?
Death
Let losers talk: yet thou shalt die;
Christian
Spare not, do thy worst.
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5. Dramatic Monologue: "The Collar" (in NAEL7)
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6. Echo poem
HEAVEN
O who will show me those delights on high?
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7. Figure poem: "The Altar," "Easter Wings" (both in NAEL7)
A broken A L T A R, Lord, thy servant rears, Made of a heart, and cemented with tears: Whose parts are as thy hand did frame; No workman's tool hath touched the same. A H E A R T alone Is such a stone, As nothing but Thy power doth cut. Wherefore each part Of my hard heart Meets in this frame, To praise thy Name; That, if I chance to hold my peace, These stones to praise thee may not cease. O let thy blessed S A C R I F I C E be mine, And sanctify this A L T A R to be thine. |
Lord, who createdst man in wealth and store,
Though foolishly he lost the same,
Decaying more and more,
Till he became
Most poor:
With thee
Oh let me rise
As larks, harmoniously,
And sing this day thy victories:
Then shall the fall further the flight in me.
My tender age in sorrow did begin:
And still with sicknesses and shame
Thou didst so punish sin,
That I became
Most thin.
With thee
Let me combine
And feel this day thy victory:
For, if I imp my wing on thine
Affliction shall advance the flight in me.
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| The poem is usually printed in modern anthologies as seen above. In the 1633 edition. the poem is printed as seen in the scanned copy below, making it look more like its title. |
8a. Lyric poem
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8b. Lyric poem Denial When
my devotions could not pierce
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8c. Lyric poem
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8d. Lyric poem Jordan (1) Who says that fictions only and false hair
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| 9. Pruning poem
PARADISE
[No. 104]
What open force, or hidden CHARM
Inclose me still for fear I START.
When you dost greater judgments SPARE,
Such sharpness shows the sweetest FREND*,
*orig. spelling
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10. Sonnet: "Redemption," "Prayer (1)"
Prayer. (I)
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| 11a. Wreath Poem
SIN'S ROUND
[No. 94]
My words take fire from my inflamed thoughts,
My hands do join to finish the inventions:
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11b. Wreath poem
A WREATH
[No. 157]
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12. "Life" (No. 69) [referred to in NAEL7 introduction]
I made a posie*, while the day ran by:
*bouquet; poem; poetic motto inside a finger ring
Here will I smell my remnants out, and tie
My life within this band*.
*bouquet; or finger ring
But time did beckon to the flowers, and they
By noon most cunningly did steal way,
And withered in my hand.
My hand was next to them, and then my heart:
I took, without more thinking, in good part
Time's gentle admonition:
Who did so sweetly death's sad taste convey,
Making my mind to smell my fatal day,
Yet sug'ring the suspicion.
Farewell, dear flowers, sweetly your time ye spent,
Fit, while ye lived, for smell or ornament,
And after death for cures.
I follow straight without complaints or grief,
Since if my scent be good, I care not if
It be as short as yours.
Questions on the poems
(1) In "Coloss. 3.3: 'Our life is hid with Christ in God'" [No. 60] (acrostic), how is the acrostic form used thematically to parallel the poem's epigraph*? Why not use the first letter or first word acrostic, rather than the acrostic form actually used?
(3) (a) Relative to "Ana-Mary/Army-gram" [No. 52] (anagram), what does the repeated expression "Lord of Hosts" in the Old Testament mean, exactly, and how does it relate to an army? (one of the few drawbacks of the NIV translation of the Bible is the purposeful and announced omission of translating the Hebrew word tsabaot and this recurrent phrase) (b) How, then, would Mary (both person and word) be appropriately related to army (concept and word)? (c) What underlying pun on the word host might the poem contain, and with what significances?
(4) (a) For comparison-contrast to Herbert's "A Dialogue-Anthem" [No. 89] (debat, dialogue poem), one of the most famous examples of this genre or subgenre (representing a debate between opposing views or attitudes) is Andrew Marvell's "A Dialogue Between the Soul and Body" (in NAEL), which you should look up in NAEL. (b) Also for comparison-contrast, look up Donne's Holy Sonnet 10 ("Death Be Not Proud") in NAEL. (c) How is the change in rhyme scheme or pattern of rhymes thematically significant in Herbert's poem?
(6) The allusiveness of "Heaven" [No. 161] results from the mythological figure of Echo and the echo poem usually having been reserved for romantic verse (cf. the entry on echo verse in HTL, with an excerpt); how does Herbert recall and contrast romantic verse in his use of this form?
(9) Part of "Paradise" [No. 104] (pruning poem) is quoted in HTL to exemplify the entry on "pruning poem." How do the metaphor of pruning, the successive pruning of a letter in each stanza, and the poem's religious ideas coincide or cooperate? How might the triplet stanza be thematic? How does the poem have greater resonance when the reader considers that Herbert was often in ill health, which culminated in his early death? How might this fact resonate in other of Herbert's poems, including those read in this course?
(11b) Compare Herbert's "A Wreath" [No. 157] (wreath
poem) with Andrew Marvell's religious poem "The Coronet," studying how
the wreath form helps express the poem's ideas. How does Herbert use anadiplosis
in his poem, and how might he be recalling and contrasting the poetry of
Sir Philip Sidney with this device?
Questions on the Poems
N & Q on "The Altar" (NAEL7 #1; Temple #1)
1. Why might Herbert have selected this poem as
appropriate for the first poem of his collection?
N & Q on "Redemption" (NAEL7 #2; Temple #8)
1. True allegory, the elaborate and consistent set of correspondences between one set of terms and another, is rare in literature, but found in this poem. How does each vehicle* stand for its particular tenor*?
2. (a) Like Donne in his Holy Sonnets, how might Herbert be making allusively contrasting use of the form in this sonnet? How might the religious poets be contrasting secular, romantic sonnets with their religious ones? (b) How is the Italian form overlaid on the English form in this sonnet?
3. How do lines 3-4 allude to the Old and New Testaments, respectively? Where and how does Paul discuss this issue in the New Testament?
N & Q on "Easter Wings" (NAEL7 #4; Temple #11)
1. In this poem, the most famous shaped poem in English, how do the concepts of expansion and contraction work (a) in each line, (b) in the succession of lines, and (c) in each stanza?
2. How do the pictorial shape of the poem, several of its particular metaphors, the occasion, and the Christian concept of heaven all relate to rising or flying?
3. As mentioned above, Herbert was often in ill
health, culminating in his premature death; where does this poem resonate
with that autobiographical background?
4. How do Herbert's shaped poems compare or contrast with the many shaped
poems that have been written by many modern poets, such as
William Burford,
Dorothi Charles,
E.E. Cummings,
John Hollander,
Robert Hollander,
Michael McFee,
May Swenson, or
Charles Webb?
N & Q on "Prayer (1)" (NAEL7 #6; Temple #19)
1. According to the footnote in NAEL on "Affliction (1)," why are arabic numerals in parentheses used for several of Herbert's poems?
2. (a) According to Adams and Logan in their NAEL footnote on this poem, what notable grammatical peculiarity does it have? What thematic function might this grammar help convey? (b) How many metaphors occur in the poem to describe prayer? What sequence or sequences might there be in them?
3. What clear influences of this poem can be seen
in Henry Vaughan's "The Night: John 3.2" (in NAEL, and explained
in NAEL footnote to the poem) as well as Vaughan's "The Night: John 3.2"
(NAEL and pointed out in the NAEL footnote) and his punningly-titled poem
"Son-days":
"Son-days" by Henry Vaughan
1
Bright shadows of true rest! some shoots of bliss,
Heaven once a week;
The next world's gladness prepossessed in this;
A day to seek
Eternity in time; the steps by which
We climb above all ages; lamps that light
Man through his heap of dark days; and the rich,
And full redemption of the whole week's flight.
2
The pulleys unto headlong man; time's bower;
The narrow way;
Transplanted Paradise; God's walking hour;
The cool o'the day;
The creatures' Jubilee' God's parle with dust;
Heaven here; man on those hills of myrrh, and flowers;
Angels descending; the returns of trust;
A gleam of glory, after six-days-showers.
3
The Church's love-feasts; time's prerogative,
And interest
Deducted from the whole; the combs, and hive,
And home of rest.
The milky way chalked out with suns; a clue
That guides through erring hours; and in full story
A taste of Heaven on earth; the pledge, and cue
Of a full feast; and the out courts of glory.
N & Q on "Jordan (1)" (NAEL7 #7; Temple #26)
1. How is this poem, like "Denial," "Jordan (2)," "The Collar," and "The Forerunners," metapoetic--that is, what ideas about literature and poetry does it express?
2. (a) How does Herbert turn the neoplatonism (cf. Sidney, Spenser, et al.) of English Renaissance romantic poetry against itself in stanzas 1-2, along with satiric thrusts against courtliness and courtiership? (b) In his repeated interrogatives in the poem, what rhetorical device is Herbert himself using? Why should Herbert be skilled in rhetoric, given the biographical data given about him in the first paragraph of Adams' and Logan's introduction in NAEL to Herbert?
3. (a) What pun on lines (a favorite, repeated pun of Herbert, to be found in several other poems, including some anthologized in NAEL) does Herbert make in the poem? (b) How does Herbert make the speaker's utterance "plain" in line 15, as well as fulfill his combative claim to rhyme? (d) What conventional and typological symbolism (see par. 3 of the NAEL intro) is there in the reference to shepherds in stanza 3? (e) With what aquatic entity does Herbert implicitly contrast the "purling streams" of stanza 2? (f) What pun is there on "divines"(9)?
N & Q on "Denial" (NAEL7 #10; Temple #55)
1. How is the rhyme scheme of the last stanza of the poem thematically different from the preceding five stanzas?
2. What pun is there on "broken"(3), "bent"(6), "look right"(23), and "heartless"(26)?
3, How does Herbert use a sort of dramatic dialogue in this poem (stanza 3), "Jordan (1)" (stanza 3), "Jordan (2)," "Time," "The Pilgrimage," "The Collar," "The Forerunners," and "Love (3)"?
N & Q on "Virtue" (NAEL7 #11; Temple #63)
1. How does Herbert thematically vary the refrain and rhyme scheme in the last stanza of the poem, in contrast to the preceding three stanzas?
2. (a) How does the third stanza logically summarize the preceding two stanzas in imagery? (b) How does Herbert make the fourth stanza cap the third stanza, and what is suggested thematically through the structural device of capping the previous cap? (c) How might the particular flower chosen be a negative reference to secularism and romantic poetry? How does this poem, for example, contrast with the most famous short love lyric of Edmund Waller (see NNERL), anthologized in NAEL?
N & Q on "The Collar" (NAEL7 #18; Temple #122)
1. How might the title of the poem pun on collar (given the rest of the poem) as: (a) restraint (e.g., like a dog or horse collar); (b) clerical collar; (c) caller; (d) choler? How might this pun lurk in several parts of the poem?
2. (a) How does the poem have the colloquialism and drama of Donne's secular and some of his religious poetry? (b) How does variation in line length lend itself to the colloquialism and drama referred to in part a of this question? (c) How does punctuation help convey the colloquialism and drama of the poem? (d) What puns might there be on "lines" (4), "in suit" (6; cf. 31), "still" (6), and "fit" (21)?
3. (a) How do many of the images and metaphors
have an implied, ironic typological symbolism contrasting the secular reference
or symbolism?
(b) What irony and underlying illogic lie in
the speaker's simile of his life being "free as the road"(4)? (c)
How does the poem have a reversal structure?
N & Q on "Love (3)" (NAEL7 #24; Temple #162)
1. Why might Herbert have selected this poem to
come last in his collection?